Revise my analytical report

Dear Writer,

I have wrote analytical report, but I want someone could revise my report to the specific report that my professor required. My professor said that essay looks like a research paper, so I need you to write to a specific, direct audience (e.g., a company or organization), and not just “in general” like a research paper. The “Analytical report-MW” is my report that I want to be revised. Please revise the report up to  2000 words. I also upload the analytical report sample paper(LinkedIn) and guideline as well to help you revise well. Please help me revise the report better and based on the sample paper and guideline to revise it, and I want to get good grade. I really appreciate it. Thank you so much. Please free to contact me if you have any questions.