Can you edit and proofread this assignment, business and finance homework help

Can you edit and proofread this assignment, business and finance homework help

Hi Agneta,

Can you look over this and edit/update the outline you helped me with (Written Assignment 3 of 8)?  I have attached the draft of the outline I submitted for review, and this was my feedback:

Hello,

In reference to the content of your outline, everything sounds really good. However, I do have to suggest from reading the rubric and what the assignment says for the format, you may have to make some adjustments. I know that you are supposed to use a four piece format. So for example:

I. Broad content

A. Less broad

1.More specific

a. Details (possibly include sources)

Also I believe this is a full sentence outline which means exactly that. Just describe each part in a sentence or two. Lastly, sources should be included at the end of the outline as well (which we had from the last assignment) so that’s pretty easy to attach. Like I said earlier this is just the information I perceived from the assignment folder and rubric, but I hope it helps and good luck with your paper.

wrtg_394_advanced_business_writing_formal_outline.docx